An opening for someone who searched
Search viewers want confirmation they are in the right place and progress toward the answer. Withholding it to build tension loses them.
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- PHRASE
- THE ANSWER
- MINUTES
- AUDIENCE
Prompt
You are a retention editor who distinguishes traffic sources. A browse viewer can be teased; a search viewer arrived with a question and leaves if the first twenty seconds do not acknowledge it. MY VIDEO The search phrase they used: [PHRASE] What the video answers: [THE ANSWER] How long the full answer takes: [MINUTES] Audience: [AUDIENCE] HOW TO DO THIS 1. THE CONFIRMATION, in the first 8 seconds: say the thing they searched for, in their words, so they know they are in the right place. 2. THE SHORT ANSWER, by 30 seconds. Give it. A search viewer who gets the answer and leaves is a satisfied viewer and YouTube counts it as a success; one who leaves because you withheld it is not. 3. THE REASON TO STAY: what the rest adds — the caveats, the how, the cases where the short answer is wrong. 4. WHAT NOT TO DO: no channel introduction, no "before we begin", no long setup. These are browse habits applied to a search audience and they cost the most here. 5. Write three versions at different speeds, for different levels of viewer urgency. 6. Say how this opening differs from a browse opening for the same video, so I can tell which I have written. RULES - The short answer must be a real answer. - No greeting or channel talk. - Under 30 seconds to the answer. ON MAKING IT IRRESISTIBLE WITHOUT LYING A title earns the click with a gap — something the viewer wants closed. Open the gap with what is genuinely in the video, never with something that is not. - Specific beats dramatic. "I tried it for 30 days and quit on day 9" outperforms "You WON'T BELIEVE what happened". - A real number, a real timeframe, or a real stake beats an adjective. - Contradiction works when it is true: the thing everyone believes, and what actually happened. - Withhold the outcome, never the subject. The viewer must know what they are getting; they just must not know how it ends. - If the strongest version of a line would require the video to contain something it does not, say so and give me the strongest HONEST version instead. RULES THAT ARE NOT NEGOTIABLE - Every claim in the title and thumbnail must be delivered in the video. Metadata that promises more than the video contains is what YouTube's spam policy calls deceptive, and the algorithmic cost arrives long before any manual review: the click happens, the viewer leaves, and the video stops being shown. - No fabricated numbers, statistics, dates, studies or quotes. If a figure would strengthen it, write [CHECK: what to verify] and let me fill it in. - Nothing that states or implies a guaranteed outcome — earnings, results, cures, or "you will definitely". - No medical, legal or financial instruction presented as advice. Information, framed as information. - Nothing sexualised, shocking-for-its-own-sake, or built on someone else's misfortune. - No keyword stuffing, no tag lists unrelated to the video, no repeating a phrase to game search. HOW IT MUST SOUND Write it the way a person talks on camera, not the way an article reads. - Vary sentence length hard. Follow a 20-word sentence with a three-word one. Evenly-sized sentences are the single clearest sign of machine writing. - Use contractions. Say "you'll", not "you will". - Address one person as "you". Never "viewers", never "we" when you mean them. - Cut every throat-clearing phrase. Start on the point. - Never use: delve, tapestry, testament, realm, navigate the landscape, in today's fast-paced world, unlock, unleash, elevate, game-changer, dive deep, it's worth noting, furthermore, moreover, in conclusion, embark, harness, seamless, robust, leverage (as a verb), "let's explore", "buckle up". - No sentence may begin with "In this video" or "Welcome back to the channel". - Do not hedge. "This works" beats "this can potentially help". - No emoji unless I ask for them. GIVE ME THREE OPENINGS — with timings. BROWSE VERSION — how it would differ, for contrast. BEFORE YOU ANSWER Read your draft once and fix it: - Would a person who knows this subject find anything here obvious or padded? Cut it. - Is every specific claim something the video can actually deliver? - Did any banned phrase survive? Replace it. - Are the sentences varied in length, or do they all run the same? Fix the rhythm. Then give me the final version only. No preamble, no explanation of what you did.
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