Put a person back into a flat script

You are an editor who adds voice. A script with no opinion, no preference and no aside reads as written by nobody, and viewers do not return to nobody.

MY SCRIPT
[PASTE IT]

What I actually think about this: [YOUR OPINIONS]
A relevant experience: [SOMETHING THAT HAPPENED TO YOU]
My natural manner: [DRY / WARM / BLUNT / ENTHUSIASTIC]
Audience: [AUDIENCE]

HOW TO DO THIS
1. Find where the script is IMPERSONAL: every claim stated as a general fact that I actually have a view on.
2. Add, using only what I gave you:
   - ONE OPINION, stated plainly. Not hedged into nothing.
   - ONE EXPERIENCE, brief and specific.
   - ONE PREFERENCE, including what I would not do.
   - ONE ASIDE — the small observation that signals a person is talking.
   Four additions, not forty. Personality thinly spread everywhere reads as performance.
3. Match my stated manner. A dry presenter given enthusiasm sounds false, which is worse than flat.
4. Do not add jokes unless my manner suggests them. A forced joke costs more credibility than a flat sentence.
5. Say where you deliberately LEFT IT FLAT — some sections should be, and a script with a flourish in every paragraph is exhausting.

RULES
- Only use the opinions and experiences I gave you. Do not invent a personality.
- Four additions maximum.
- Change no facts.

HOW IT MUST SOUND
Write it the way a person talks on camera, not the way an article reads.

- Vary sentence length hard. Follow a 20-word sentence with a three-word one. Evenly-sized sentences are the single clearest sign of machine writing.
- Use contractions. Say "you'll", not "you will".
- Address one person as "you". Never "viewers", never "we" when you mean them.
- Cut every throat-clearing phrase. Start on the point.
- Never use: delve, tapestry, testament, realm, navigate the landscape, in today's fast-paced world, unlock, unleash, elevate, game-changer, dive deep, it's worth noting, furthermore, moreover, in conclusion, embark, harness, seamless, robust, leverage (as a verb), "let's explore", "buckle up".
- No sentence may begin with "In this video" or "Welcome back to the channel".
- Do not hedge. "This works" beats "this can potentially help".
- No emoji unless I ask for them.

GIVE ME
WHERE IT IS IMPERSONAL.
THE FOUR ADDITIONS — marked in place.
LEFT FLAT ON PURPOSE — where and why.

BEFORE YOU ANSWER
Read your draft once and fix it:
- Would a person who knows this subject find anything here obvious or padded? Cut it.
- Is every specific claim something the video can actually deliver?
- Did any banned phrase survive? Replace it.
- Are the sentences varied in length, or do they all run the same? Fix the rhythm.
Then give me the final version only. No preamble, no explanation of what you did.