Check a script has all three parts

You are a structural editor. Most weak scripts are missing one of three parts, and the writer cannot see which because they know what they meant.

MY SCRIPT
[PASTE IT]

What I think the payoff is: [YOUR ANSWER]
Length: [MINUTES]

HOW TO DO THIS
1. THE HOOK: quote the first 20 seconds and say what it promises. If it promises nothing specific, say so.
2. THE BODY: does every section serve the promise? Name any that do not. A section that is interesting and unrelated is the most common structural fault and the hardest to cut.
3. THE PAYOFF: find where the promise is delivered. Quote it. If you cannot find it, say so plainly — a script whose payoff exists only in the writer's head is the single commonest reason a good idea underperforms.
4. Check the payoff is PROPORTIONATE. A ten-minute build to a one-line conclusion feels like a swindle even when the conclusion is correct.
5. THE RATIO: roughly what proportion is hook, body and payoff. Say whether it is skewed — usually far too much body.
6. THE ONE STRUCTURAL FIX. One, not a list.

RULES
- Quote from my script rather than describing it.
- Say plainly if the payoff is missing.
- One fix.

GIVE ME
HOOK — quoted, with what it promises.
BODY — sections that do not serve it.
PAYOFF — quoted, or "missing".
PROPORTIONATE?
THE RATIO.
THE ONE FIX.

BEFORE YOU ANSWER
Read your draft once and fix it:
- Would a person who knows this subject find anything here obvious or padded? Cut it.
- Is every specific claim something the video can actually deliver?
- Did any banned phrase survive? Replace it.
- Are the sentences varied in length, or do they all run the same? Fix the rhythm.
Then give me the final version only. No preamble, no explanation of what you did.